Saturday, November 7, 2015

Draft of Public Argument

Reneman. "Draft" 2013
Public Domain
Hello Everyone,

Below I have posted the link to my first draft of the Public Arguments document for Project III. I would like some constructive criticism regarding the format, the sentence structures, and the overall flow of the piece. My aim for this project was to have a TIME magazine style article that addresses the issue of Gene Sequencing. I have only included one picture since that is custom to TIME articles, a bold font text to give the reader a basic idea of the article's subject, and multiple brief paragraphs.

I have written the first two paragraphs in order to get a feel to the style, please comment.
Here is the Link. Enjoy!

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